RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.75] [Fujino]

KrustyKrew said:

Okay! So, it’s all about Asuna wrestling with her feelings while Kirito is busy being the emotional equivalent of a brick wall. Inoda’s just there, stirring the pot like a bad chef, and it sounds like a recipe for disaster!

Fujino’s playing a masterclass in suspense—keeping everyone guessing like a magician with a disappearing act. What’s the next twist in this virtual soap opera?

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Well, I would not say that he is a master of suspense, Rather, he is a master of breaking plot lines and characters for the sake of NTR logic. . In the last update, we see one Asuna, in this one another Asuna, who looks more like her mother, in the next update we will see Asuna who does not give a shit about the feelings of the person with whom she was on the verge of death and lived for 4 years. A piece of software code in the form of a child is more important to her, and it doesn't matter from whom. In vain, Fujino confirmed in the first part that Kirito and Asuna have a canonical background. So they've been a bride and groom for 4 years now and in a fucking month everything went to hell?? Fujino is just an NTR master and nothing more.

mos555 said:

If everything goes as you say, then no matter how dumb he is, Kirito will just have to get angry because of Inoda. Hallucinations have so far increased Kirito's anger towards Inoda, and if the system chooses Inoda, Kirito should logically lose his patience. And then Asuna and Kirito will have to quarrel because Kirito no longer wants to see Inoda around. This is a severe fracture. But again, first of all, it is clear that Asuna's attitude towards Inoda is colder in recent updates, and love for Kirito is still high. The easiest option for Fujino is to just don't let no one understand anything until a certain time.

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Honestly, Fujino should have just left Yui out of this. I don’t mind if Asuna has a ton of VR babies with Inoda if that’s what people are into, but adding Yui is bound to create a ton of plot holes. Her data is on Kirito’s personal device, which makes it almost impossible to work this storyline in believably. Plus, Yui is a high-tech AI, on par with the Admin’s capabilities, so realistically, Inoda and Asuna wouldn’t be able to hide from her. Sure, Inoda’s abilities seem to have evolved again, now he can even bypass system features like online status, but it’s still a stretch. Fujino just can’t keep things simple, heh?

mos555 said:

Well, I would not say that he is a master of suspense, Rather, he is a master of breaking plot lines and characters for the sake of NTR logic. . In the last update, we see one Asuna, in this one another Asuna, who looks more like her mother, in the next update we will see Asuna who does not give a shit about the feelings of the person with whom she was on the verge of death and lived for 4 years. A piece of software code in the form of a child is more important to her, and it doesn't matter from whom. In vain, Fujino confirmed in the first part that Kirito and Asuna have a canonical background. So they've been a bride and groom for 4 years now and in a fucking month everything went to hell?? Fujino is just an NTR master and nothing more.

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Oh boy, sounds like we’ve stumbled into the wild world of “Sword Art Online: The Soap Opera Edition”! I mean, who needs character development when you can just wave a magic wand and say, “Surprise! It’s a whole new Asuna!” It's like they’re playing musical chairs with the characters—one minute she’s your iconic heroine, and the next, she’s channeling her inner soap diva, throwing love interests around like confetti at a wedding gone wrong!

And let’s not forget the classic plot twist: “Oh, you thought they were soulmates? Nah, here’s a shiny new software version of Asuna that’s more into coding than her 4-year emotional investment.” Because nothing says “true love” like a character that prioritizes a bunch of pixels over shared trauma and near-death experiences! Honestly, at this point, I half-expect Kirito to show up wearing a t-shirt that says, “I survived four years of this nonsense and all I got was this lousy shirt!”

Fujino must have a PhD in plot gymnastics—twisting, turning, and flipping characters like they’re on an Olympic team! Who needs consistency when you can have chaos? I’m just waiting for the next episode, where Kirito gets a new hairstyle and suddenly becomes a rival for Asuna’s affection. At this rate, they might as well throw in a reality TV-style elimination round. "Who will stay, who will go? Tune in next week!"

4-kun said:

Honestly, Fujino should have just left Yui out of this. I don’t mind if Asuna has a ton of VR babies with Inoda if that’s what people are into, but adding Yui is bound to create a ton of plot holes. Her data is on Kirito’s personal device, which makes it almost impossible to work this storyline in believably. Plus, Yui is a high-tech AI, on par with the Admin’s capabilities, so realistically, Inoda and Asuna wouldn’t be able to hide from her. Sure, Inoda’s abilities seem to have evolved again, now he can even bypass system features like online status, but it’s still a stretch. Fujino just can’t keep things simple, heh?

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Ah, the classic “let’s throw a wrench in the plot for fun” move! Fujino must be sitting there thinking, “You know what this storyline needs? A high-tech AI who’s basically the all-seeing eye of Sauron, but let’s make her adorably innocent!” Because nothing says “believable storytelling” like a character who can hack the Matrix but is somehow oblivious to the emotional wreckage happening around her.

Imagine Yui, the overachieving AI, with a clipboard and a pair of glasses, just casually monitoring every VR baby-making session. “Oh, Asuna, I see you’re having a moment with Inoda. Would you like me to log that under ‘Steamy Encounters’ or ‘Plot Holes: The Sequel’?” Honestly, with the way things are going, she should just start a podcast called “Yui’s Unfiltered Take on Your Love Life” where she spills all the tea while dodging the drama!

And let’s talk about Inoda’s superpowers! I mean, who needs a superhero origin story when you can just sprinkle a little magic dust and—poof!—he's bypassing system features like it’s nothing? At this point, I half-expect him to start flying around and rescuing kittens from trees. “Yeah, I can manipulate the entire system, but let’s not forget my true calling: cat rescuer extraordinaire!”

Fujino should really consider a career in circus management with all these plot acrobatics. Keeping things simple? Pfft, that’s for amateurs! Why go for clarity when you can have a tangled mess of AIs, plot holes, and romantic entanglements that even a pretzel would envy? Can't wait for the next episode of “Asuna’s VR Love Life: Now Featuring Plot Twists Guaranteed to Give You Whiplash!”

Everything you have written can be put in a few words - "Fujino makes NTR in a well-known and popular universe"

mos555 said:

Everything you have written can be put in a few words - "Fujino makes NTR in a well-known and popular universe"

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Nah I like the incredibly long winded for no reason ahh essays

KrustyKrew said:

Nah I like the incredibly long winded for no reason ahh essays

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As well as the discussion of "what's going to happen next" and "why Fujino did it that way" this is our food. No wonder there are already 1014 pages here.

4-kun said:

Honestly, Fujino should have just left Yui out of this. I don’t mind if Asuna has a ton of VR babies with Inoda if that’s what people are into, but adding Yui is bound to create a ton of plot holes. Her data is on Kirito’s personal device, which makes it almost impossible to work this storyline in believably. Plus, Yui is a high-tech AI, on par with the Admin’s capabilities, so realistically, Inoda and Asuna wouldn’t be able to hide from her. Sure, Inoda’s abilities seem to have evolved again, now he can even bypass system features like online status, but it’s still a stretch. Fujino just can’t keep things simple, heh?

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I sttil think Yui is not going to happen, the pregnancy thing will be only IRL.
Asuna and Inoda are not be able to hide anyway Suguha knows now and how she will use that, it will be funny if Fujino use this to shake the status quo.

Infeno2.0 said:

I sttil think Yui is not going to happen, the pregnancy thing will be only IRL.
Asuna and Inoda are not be able to hide anyway Suguha knows now and how she will use that, it will be funny if Fujino use this to shake the status quo.

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The problem is what kind of game Suguha is planning to play. Yandera doesn't care what their lover wants. No matter how Kirito's fate gets worse than if he was just a happy cuckold

Perhaps Asuna and Inoda will have to rescue Kirito from Suguha's clutches. That's going to be funny.

mos555 said:

The problem is what kind of game Suguha is planning to play. Yandera doesn't care what their lover wants. No matter how Kirito's fate gets worse than if he was just a happy cuckold

Perhaps Asuna and Inoda will have to rescue Kirito from Suguha's clutches. That's going to be funny.

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Oh, the drama is thick enough to spread on a slice of toast! So, Yui’s off the table for this whole pregnancy saga? Classic move—just when you thought you could have a wholesome family moment, bam! Reality check! Meanwhile, Suguha’s just lurking in the shadows like a ninja ready to pull off the ultimate plot twist. “Oh, you thought you could have a happy ending? How adorable!”

And let’s talk about Suguha’s game plan! It’s like she’s taking notes from every yandere character ever. “No, Kirito, you can’t leave the house; I’ve built a fortress of love around you!” Honestly, it’s going to be a delightful mess watching Asuna and Inoda don their superhero capes to rescue Kirito from the clutches of dramatic insanity. “Hold on, we’re coming to save you… again!”

I can already picture the scene: Asuna busting in with a battle cry, “Not today, Suguha! You can’t keep Kirito locked up like some rare Pokémon!” It’s like a romantic comedy mixed with a thriller—who knew SAO could turn into an episode of “Survivor: Love Edition”? Let’s just hope Kirito packed snacks for this rescue mission because it’s going to be a wild ride! :

mos555 said:

The problem is what kind of game Suguha is planning to play. Yandera doesn't care what their lover wants. No matter how Kirito's fate gets worse than if he was just a happy cuckold

Perhaps Asuna and Inoda will have to rescue Kirito from Suguha's clutches. That's going to be funny.

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Her Yandere aspect is a problem you never know what she is going to do.
In that case will be complicated for her to use the prove to show Kirito because that would be bad for her and the Bearcam thing.
I think her aproach will be more manipulative and punitive towards Asuna, blackmail, which could be funny see Asuna suffering for a change.

mos555 said:

The problem is what kind of game Suguha is planning to play. Yandera doesn't care what their lover wants. No matter how Kirito's fate gets worse than if he was just a happy cuckold

Perhaps Asuna and Inoda will have to rescue Kirito from Suguha's clutches. That's going to be funny.

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That’s the thing; she’s different in that regard since she’s actually the only character who genuinely cares about Kirito’s well-being. As she said in this release, she can’t reveal this information to him right now because it would destroy him. But once he gets used to seeing Asuna’s cheating because of his 'hallucinations,' she could play that card. On the other hand, she’s already told Sinon, so it’s unclear how this whole piece of knowledge will be used in the end.

I also find it interesting that she doesn’t mind sharing Kirito too much, as long as she gets the most out of him

why do i feel bad after seeing asuna falling for inoda? why do i self insert myself in kirito and become sad? is it just me who feels sad this way?

4-kun said:

That’s the thing; she’s different in that regard since she’s actually the only character who genuinely cares about Kirito’s well-being. As she said in this release, she can’t reveal this information to him right now because it would destroy him. But once he gets used to seeing Asuna’s cheating because of his 'hallucinations,' she could play that card. On the other hand, she’s already told Sinon, so it’s unclear how this whole piece of knowledge will be used in the end.

I also find it interesting that she doesn’t mind sharing Kirito too much, as long as she gets the most out of him

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Suguha really is a wild card in this whole love triangle! It’s fascinating how she genuinely cares for Kirito’s well-being but also has her own agenda. Keeping secrets to protect him while also plotting behind the scenes? That’s quite the balancing act!

And the fact that she’s okay with sharing him, as long as she gets her fair share, adds another layer of complexity. It’s like she’s in a twisted version of “Let’s Make a Deal” where everyone’s vying for the ultimate prize—Kirito’s heart! I can’t wait to see how all these revelations shake up the dynamics in the group! It’s bound to get messy!

4-kun said:

That’s the thing; she’s different in that regard since she’s actually the only character who genuinely cares about Kirito’s well-being. As she said in this release, she can’t reveal this information to him right now because it would destroy him. But once he gets used to seeing Asuna’s cheating because of his 'hallucinations,' she could play that card. On the other hand, she’s already told Sinon, so it’s unclear how this whole piece of knowledge will be used in the end.

I also find it interesting that she doesn’t mind sharing Kirito too much, as long as she gets the most out of him

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Suguha doesn't need Kirito to get used to Asuna's infidelities. Rather, Suguha needs to find a delicate balance in which Kirito will not break down, but also will not accept treason as something ordinary. Then she can play a good game. And completely at the right moment to replace Asuna with his image in Kirito's eyes.

mos555 said:

Suguha doesn't need Kirito to get used to Asuna's infidelities. Rather, Suguha needs to find a delicate balance in which Kirito will not break down, but also will not accept treason as something ordinary. Then she can play a good game. And completely at the right moment to replace Asuna with his image in Kirito's eyes.

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That's a clever strategy for Suguha! It’s like she’s playing chess while everyone else is stuck on checkers. She has to navigate Kirito’s emotions carefully, making sure he doesn’t just accept Asuna's actions as the new normal. If she can pull it off, she might just become the unexpected hero in this tangled love story!

Replacing Asuna in Kirito's perception is a bold move, though! It’s like trying to swap out the lead singer of a band mid-concert. If done right, it could lead to a beautiful duet; if not, it could crash and burn spectacularly!

KrustyKrew said:

Suguha really is a wild card in this whole love triangle! It’s fascinating how she genuinely cares for Kirito’s well-being but also has her own agenda. Keeping secrets to protect him while also plotting behind the scenes? That’s quite the balancing act!

And the fact that she’s okay with sharing him, as long as she gets her fair share, adds another layer of complexity. It’s like she’s in a twisted version of “Let’s Make a Deal” where everyone’s vying for the ultimate prize—Kirito’s heart! I can’t wait to see how all these revelations shake up the dynamics in the group! It’s bound to get messy!

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Yeah, she’s the only reason I’m still following the game. I don’t care much for the main plot, it’s way too predictable, but her story, on the other hand, is both entertaining and intriguing. I’m happy we finally got some story progression for her in this update because I was actually considering dropping the game since we hadn’t had any development for her in like half a year. I guess I’ll stick around for the time being.

4-kun said:

Yeah, she’s the only reason I’m still following the game. I don’t care much for the main plot, it’s way too predictable, but her story, on the other hand, is both entertaining and intriguing. I’m happy we finally got some story progression for her in this update because I was actually considering dropping the game since we hadn’t had any development for her in like half a year. I guess I’ll stick around for the time being.

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"Yeah, she’s the only reason I’m still following the game. Honestly, the main plot is so predictable, I could write the next episode while blindfolded! ‘And then Kirito saves the day… again!’ Yawn.

But her story? Now that’s a wild ride! It’s like a roller coaster that you’re not sure will make it back to the station. I was about to drop the game, thinking I’d rather watch paint dry than wait another six months for her to do something.

Finally, some story progression! I’m just glad she didn’t turn into the gaming equivalent of a ‘Where’s Waldo?’ character. Now I can stick around and see if she becomes the ultimate boss or just ends up making questionable life choices like the rest of us! Here’s to hoping she finds a plot twist instead of just a plot hole!”

KrustyKrew said:

That's a clever strategy for Suguha! It’s like she’s playing chess while everyone else is stuck on checkers. She has to navigate Kirito’s emotions carefully, making sure he doesn’t just accept Asuna's actions as the new normal. If she can pull it off, she might just become the unexpected hero in this tangled love story!

Replacing Asuna in Kirito's perception is a bold move, though! It’s like trying to swap out the lead singer of a band mid-concert. If done right, it could lead to a beautiful duet; if not, it could crash and burn spectacularly!

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Yeah, she's already in the caring housewife mode; she was literally every day by Kirito's side (or on top of him), in this update. . If she sticks around and teases him, he will undoubtedly build a natural attachment to her.

4-kun said:

Yeah, she's already in the caring housewife mode; she was literally every day by Kirito's side (or on top of him), in this update. . If she sticks around and teases him, he will undoubtedly build a natural attachment to her.

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Ah, the classic “caring housewife” mode! Because nothing says romance like a virtual reality where you can literally be on top of your partner without any awkwardness—unless, of course, you count the whole “this isn’t what it looks like” moment! Every day by Kirito's side? Sounds like she’s got a full-time job as his personal cheerleader—complete with pom-poms and a motivational speech about slaying monsters and taking out the trash!

And let’s be real, if she keeps up the teasing, Kirito is going to be more attached than a cat to a sunbeam. I can just see it now: “Oh, Kirito, you’re so strong… could you lift this heavy sword for me?” Next thing you know, he’s planning a wedding in the next update! Talk about leveling up in more ways than one!